viernes, 13 de abril de 2007

Cinquain


Hometown
Grey, Monotonous, Repetitive
Aging, Wearing, Boring
Nothing left to give
Obsolete

2 comentarios:

Maracunator dijo...

Man, for what I can see in your Cinquain poem you're bound to leave our beautiful Maracaibo.

I disagree with your opinion, but if that's your concept on our hometown, the only thing I can do for you is to wish you good luck in finding the place where you want to be.

-Christian

doris3m dijo...

Hi! That's a lovely poem... that expresses deep feelings.. but that's not a surprise at all coming from a brillian engineer that forsees the future and progress....Christian... don't worry! Our blogging engineer is not talking about our beautiful Maracaibo. He's from a small town in somewhere Venezuela... we don't want to tell names here. Just in case, so relax...!
You tell Christian, blogging engineer...

Keep on shining!

Doris3m

Keep on shining!